Thursday, 20 May 2010

Feelings!!

As part of our 'Beneath the Surface' topic we have been looking at feelings. The chidlren were asked to write a poem about feelings as part of their homework activity. Jay got really creative and wrote a song. Here are some examples:

Feelings

In the morning I felt as happy as the world cup winners
At breakfast I was as angry as tormented wasps
When noon came I was as scared as a rabbit about to be shot
At tea time I was as dizzy as a person that’s been knocked out
At bed time I was as worried as a lions prey
All these feelings I had today

By Thomas

Anger raging inside my body,
Hoping to escape someday
Like rocket steam coming out of my,
Ears
Getting angrier everyday

By Lucas

Happy as can be happy to be me happy as I’m climbing up a tree
Happy just as me
Sad I’m sad, sad just like a raining cloud
I feel dreadful and I’m so full of hurtfulness inside I feel like a broken collide
CHORUS
All the emotions and all the explosions
From happy to sad
To mad to depressed
And all the rest

Mad.
You feel so mad like being really sad
As if there was chaos in your mind not far behind

Depressed when your on a quest
Don’t have the guts because your so not impressed

By Jay

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